The Kashmir Conflict

 

The Kashmir Conflict

    There are some problems going on between Pakistan and India over kashmir. They both want kashmir but I think that kashmir should become a independent country. Then it could stop India and Pakistan from fighting or war.

    I think India and Pakistan should let Kashmir be an independent country. But they would both be allies with Kashmir and make a truse. This way they both get water because of the rivers going down into both of the countries. But If Pakistan or India fight, Kashmir will cut off their water supply from the river with a big wall to block the water.

India and pakistan should stop fighting. Because I think that there people would rather make Kashmir an independent country, instead of losing their family members in battles.

    In these paragraphs I talked about how Pakistan and India are fighting over kashmir. I hope you now think that Kashmir should either be a independent country, or be divided so India and Pakistan don't fight.

Comments

  1. AnonymousMarch 15, 2021 at 10:24 AM

    Great job! Everything is great but you need to capitalize Kashmir and Pakistan on the third paragraph.

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  2. Ms. BoyleMarch 15, 2021 at 10:35 AM

    You make some good points, but you have a lot of editing to do. Also, do not make your writing centered.

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